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i dont understand the tone in this peice. it does not move me, and the colors do not compliment the background. no originality, this is very much like every landscape i've ever seen. the technique is obviously reused an cliche. i suggest using lighter brush techniques.
the overall portrayal of the horse is not what was desired. there is a lack of lighting and the light source does not compliment what is reflected in the eyes. i can see you attempted to convey a sense of serenity, but it did not work, what with those tacky brush stokes and bland colorations.
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LadyChryse Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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n-creeps Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
thats a horse??
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gr-ay Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
horse landscape
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:iconc-o-r-q-i:
C-o-r-q-i Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU... YOU THOUGHT IT.. IT SUCKKED/?
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>:''((((
I MARKED THIS UNFAIR USELESSSS!




horsy its ok
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gr-ay Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
OMG
U SUC SO BAID I GIV U CRIT U B MEN II TRY GIV HELP OMG :'(((((
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C-o-r-q-i Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DUNT JUDGE MEMEMEG!!!!!
I WIL CUM TO UR HOUSE
AND KEL U RITE THERE!
RITE THEAR!1111ONE11!
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gr-ay Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
il fukin punch u in ur slimy cunt ye wank stain
FITE ME IRL
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:iconc-o-r-q-i:
C-o-r-q-i Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oooo
ooo
u wanna go
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:icongr-ay:
gr-ay Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
ya
ill put my dick in ye
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Mistress-of-Solitude Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's technically not useless dearie. Not all critique is going to be what you want to hear/see/read on the screen. I think it's quite fair to be honest. It's what she saw, and what you asked for. Just "for the record". Okay? She never said it "sucked" either. (Just for the record I spelled it correctly for you that time). Her critique is actually much more enlightening than your entire piece. *shrugs*
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